Which is your favorite beach? Why?

2022-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

My favorite beach is Hyeopjae beach in Jeju Island. It is so beautiful and clear. I can see everything in the beach. And its color is emerald. I want to go there again.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] Hu!

You did a very good job! Thanks for your efforts always. Keep it up! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

My favorite beach is Hyeopjae beach in Jeju Island.

>>CORRECT!
It is so beautiful and clear.

>>CORRECT!
I can see everything in the beach.

>>I can see everything on the beach.
And its color is emerald.

>>CORRECT!
I want to go there again.

>>CORRECT!

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