Which job is better related to science or art for my child?

2018-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I am not going to push my child on anyway. I will always support her or him even if she or he would want to have a job that I don\'t like. However, I actually prefer the jobs related to science rather than art. The reason why is that the jobs related to science are more stable and have more chances to earn money than the jobs related to art. Although my opinion, I won\'t force my child to the way that I prefer. I will lead her or him to choose by herself/ himself because they should do what they want to and it is the way to be happy.

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I am not going to push my child on anyway.

>> CORRECT

I will always support her or him even if she or he would want to have a job that I don\'t like.

>> CORRECT

However, I actually prefer the jobs related to science rather than art.

>> CORRECT

The reason why is that the jobs related to science are more stable and have more chances to earn money than the jobs related to art.

>> CORRECT

Although my opinion, I won\'t force my child to the way that I prefer.

>> CORRECT

I will lead her or him to choose by herself/ himself because they should do what they want to and it is the way to be happy.

>> CORRECT

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