Which kinds of animals are the strongest among land animals, sea animals? and air animals?Why?
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I think the kind of animals are the strongest among land is land animals because land is very in food.
So I think land animals is very strongest.
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Which kinds of animals are the strongest among land animals, and sea animals? and air animals? Why?
I think the kind of animals are the strongest among land is land animals because land is very in food.
So I think land animals is very strongest.
>> I think land animals are the strongest among all animals because land provides abundant food. Therefore, I believe land animals are the strongest.
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