Which machines do you think make our lives more difficult?
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Well said, Sir [이름]!
There are really pros and cons of advancing technology.
I think nowadays, it is really difficult to lose those inventions.
Whenever you walk or ride a subway, bus or train you will see people using their mobile phones.
I saw someone during a seminar who took a picture of the topics and computations showed on the projector.
It really makes our tasks easier but I think it also makes us a bit lazy.
Anyway, we can talk more about this in class. Have a wonderful night ahead.
Teacher Nina
While technology or a machine makes tasks easier, it really does not make our lives easier.
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A smart phone is something that we cannot live without it these days.
>> A smart phone is something that we cannot live without these days.
It brought us a new world where we can communicate with anyone any time anywhere.
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We are connected for 24 hours and 365 days a year.
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However, we are not free and forced to work without a break.
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Even when you take a rest at home or go on leave, you are expected to answer a phone call or check and reply to any emails.
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It also drives us nuts because we don’t even try to remember the little mundane things of life anymore.
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With auto dial, auto login and “history” functions that tell you where you’ve been, our minds have devolved so that we cannot easily remember these things.
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Once we lose our phones, we can even make a call to your kids because we do not remember their phone numbers.
>> Once we lose our phones, we can\'t even make a call to our kids because we do not remember their phone numbers.
Cable cars installed on mountains are not one of my favorites.
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They destroy the good view of beautiful mountains and actually are harmful to environment
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>> They destroy the good view of beautiful mountains and actually harmful to the environment.
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