Which machines do you think make our lives more difficult?

2015-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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While technology or a machine makes tasks easier, it really does not make our lives easier.A smart phone is something that we cannot live without it these days. It brought us a new world where we can communicate with anyone any time anywhere.We are connected for 24 hours and 365 days a year. However, we are not free and forced to work without a break.Even when you take a rest at home or go on leave, you are expected to answer a phone call or check and reply to any emails.It also drives us nuts because we don’t even try to remember the little mundane things of life anymore. With auto dial, auto login and “history” functions that tell you where you’ve been, our minds have devolved so that we cannot easily remember these things.Once we lose our phones, we can even make a call to your kids because we do not remember their phone numbers.Cable cars installed on mountains are not one of my favorites.They destroy the good view of beautiful mountains and actually are harmful to environment

강사 첨삭

Yahoo! It\'s already Thursday!

Well said, Sir [이름]!

There are really pros and cons of advancing technology.

I think nowadays, it is really difficult to lose those inventions.

Whenever you walk or ride a subway, bus or train you will see people using their mobile phones.

I saw someone during a seminar who took a picture of the topics and computations showed on the projector.

It really makes our tasks easier but I think it also makes us a bit lazy.

Anyway, we can talk more about this in class. Have a wonderful night ahead.

Teacher Nina


While technology or a machine makes tasks easier, it really does not make our lives easier.

>> correct

A smart phone is something that we cannot live without it these days.

>> A smart phone is something that we cannot live without these days.

It brought us a new world where we can communicate with anyone any time anywhere.

>> correct

We are connected for 24 hours and 365 days a year.

>> correct

However, we are not free and forced to work without a break.

>> correct

Even when you take a rest at home or go on leave, you are expected to answer a phone call or check and reply to any emails.

>> correct

It also drives us nuts because we don’t even try to remember the little mundane things of life anymore.

>> correct

With auto dial, auto login and “history” functions that tell you where you’ve been, our minds have devolved so that we cannot easily remember these things.

>> correct

Once we lose our phones, we can even make a call to your kids because we do not remember their phone numbers.

>> Once we lose our phones, we can\'t even make a call to our kids because we do not remember their phone numbers.

Cable cars installed on mountains are not one of my favorites.

>> correct

They destroy the good view of beautiful mountains and actually are harmful to environment

>> correct

>> They destroy the good view of beautiful mountains and actually harmful to the environment.

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