Which movie genre do you hate the most
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1. I like most of movies except horror one.
>>I like most kinds of movies except horror-themed ones.
2. Among those, I especially hate anything related to Ghost.
>>Among those, I especially hate anything related to ghosts.
3. I am not sure if you had an opportunity to watch Japanese ghost movies but those are hilarious!!!.
>>I\'m not sure if you\'ve had an opportunity to watch Japanese ghost movies but those are terrifying.
4. the producers are so brilliant.
>>CORRECT!
>>or: The producers are good storytellers.
5. How can you make that kind of movie?
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: How do they even come up with movies like that?
6. where those ideas come from??!!
>>Where do those ideas come from?
7. Still can\'t believe those script come from a human head.
>>I still can\'t believe those scripts came from human imagination.
8. When I was in middle school, my friend was forcing me to watch one of those in her place when her parents went for a vacation.
>>When I was in middle school, my friend forced me to watch one of those movies at her place when her parents went on a vacation.
9. We were under the blanket hiding and I was trying to cover my ears tight when I sensed scary scenes to come out in during the film.
>>We hid under the blankets and I tried covering my ears when scary scenes pop out during the film.
10. I was not able to sleep in peace for a week.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: These movies gave me constant nightmares for a week.
11. Trust me , do not watch it unless you enjoy that stuff.
>>CORRECT!
>>or: These movies are not for the weak-hearted.
12. My peers were making fun of me as a coward and I felt offensive but at the end of the day, it does not matter whether you can watch horror movie or not.
>>My peers used to make fun of me for being a coward and I felt offended. But, at the end of the day, it doesn\'t matter whether you can watch horror movies or not.
13. At that time, every kids like to tease others.
>>Kids just really like teasing each other.
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