Which natural disaster do you fear most and why?
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my house located at center of korea so It is impossible that tsunami comes to here. so I am afraid earthquake. I watched the video of earthquake happening. many buildings was collapsing and the ground was cracking. I think there are more fear disaster than earthquake. but earthquake is the most real to me.
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Hi [이름]!
People fear natural disasters because they are disastrous. People\'s lives and safety are put in danger. Habitats, homes and property are destroyed. Most people would prefer the life (and everything that goes with it) that they live now to life (or lack thereof) that would follow a natural disaster.
my house located at center of korea so It is impossible that tsunami comes to here.
>> My house is located at the center of Korea so it\'s impossible to have tsunamis here.
so I am afraid earthquake.
>> That\'s why I am afraid of earthquakes more.
I watched the video of earthquake happening.
>> I watched a video of an earthquake happening before.
many buildings was collapsing and the ground was cracking.
>> Many building were collapsing and the ground was cracking.
I think there are more fear disaster than earthquake.
>> I think there are more scary disasters out there but I am scared of earthquakes the most.
but earthquake is the most real to me.
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