Which of your actions / habits could possibly annoy others?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m impetuous person. Sometimes I said so quickly that they cannot understand my words.
my sister usually say to me \'Breath and talk\'. And my actions also so fast and rash.
My friends cannot follow me and they want to share step.
And I tell them to hurry up. My around people may be hard to go with me together.
They might be annoied.
But relaxing is hard to me. I always think that I don\'t have time and I don\'t want to waste my precious time.
So I prefer quickly moving and saying something as well as working.
I want to finish early, but that time I get some mistakes.
Actually that actions are not good at for me either.
And that is my one of personalities I want to change.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
This might be a pet peeve for you and others, so control yourself in times it happens again. You have to relax and take time to breathe. I think you are excited to speak out or you are nervous. Try to smile then speak. Thank you very much for being a diligent writer. ^_^
~T. Maine
>> I\'m an impetuous person.
Sometimes I said so quickly that they cannot understand my words.
>> Sometimes I speak so quickly that people cannot understand my words.
my sister usually say to me \'Breath and talk\'.
my sister usually say to me \'Breath and talk\'.
>> My sister usually says to me, \" Breath and talk\".
And my actions also so fast and rash.
>> And my actions are also fast and rushing.
My friends cannot follow me and they want to share step.
My friends cannot follow me and they want to share step.
>> My friends cannot follow me and they want to share steps.
And I tell them to hurry up.
And I tell them to hurry up.
>> Correct.
My around people may be hard to go with me together.
>> The people around me may have a hard time going with me.
They might be annoied.
They might be annoied.
>> They might be annoyed.
But relaxing is hard to me.
But relaxing is hard to me.
>> But relaxing is hard for me.
I always think that I don\'t have time and I don\'t want to waste my precious time.
>> Correct.
So I prefer quickly moving and saying something as well as working.
So I prefer quickly moving and saying something as well as working.
>>Correct.
I want to finish early, but that time I get some mistakes.
I want to finish early, but that time I get some mistakes.
>> Correct.
Actually that actions are not good at for me either.
>>Actually those actions are not good for me either.
And that is my one of personalities I want to change.
And that is my one of personalities I want to change.
>> And that is one of the personalities that I want to change.
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