Which of your friends or family posts the most entertaining content on social media?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually see some stories on the Instargram. In there, my friends often post pictures of some delicious dishes. I like to see the pictures because it looks so delicious. After I saw it, I sometimes search the restaurant where my friend went. Their pictures made me eat the dishes, so I admire their skill of taking pictures. Because my friends are very good at taking pictures, I want to learn it. But it’s too hard to me, I’m just satisfied with looking it. Therefore, my friend who uploads the most entertaining content in SNS is uploading dishes.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I used to take pictures of food.
Now, I just grab the food once it\'s served - hahaha.
I usually see some stories on the Instargram.
>>> CORRECT!
In there, my friends often post pictures of some delicious dishes.
>>> There, my friends often post pictures of delicious food.
I like to see the pictures because it looks so delicious.
>>> CORRECT!
After I saw it, I sometimes search the restaurant where my friend went.
>>> After watching it, I sometimes search the restaurant my friend went to.
Their pictures made me eat the dishes, so I admire their skill of taking pictures.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: Their pictures made me eat, so I admire their photography skills.
Because my friends are very good at taking pictures, I want to learn it.
>>> My friends take pictures very well, so I want to learn it.
But it’s too hard to me, I’m just satisfied with looking it.
>>> But it\'s too hard for me, I\'m satisfied just by looking at it.
Therefore, my friend who uploads the most entertaining content in SNS is uploading dishes.
>>> CORRECT!
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