Which of your friends or family posts the most entertaining content on social media?
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My daughter has two Instargram social media account.
>>My daughter has two Instagram social media accounts.
One is her own and another is her brothers.
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She made her brother\'s Instargram account herself.
>>She made her brother\'s Instagram account by herself.
And she takes piectures and videos of her younger brother and updates it on the brother\'s Instargram account every time.
>>And she takes pictures and videos of her younger brother and updates them on her brother\'s Instagram account every time.
Also she updates her Instargram.
>>Also, she updates her Instagram.
She thinks her brother should be a celebrity because he is handsome and smart.
>>correct
I am reluctant to post my photos or personal stories on the internet.
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Maybe because I am an older gerneration.
>>Maybe because I am an older generation.
I wonder whether I have to disclose my information on the internet in order to live with new generation.
>>I wonder whether I have to disclose my information on the internet in order to live with the new generation.
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