Which one are you usually low on?
학생이 쓴 원문
Many people are suffered lacking money for their life.
There is no one who have enough money.
We live in the capitalism. so a money is very important thing to live our life.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]. Thank you for answering this question. I agree with you that there is no one who has enough money. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
Many people are suffered lacking money for their life.>> Many people suffer from a lack of money in their lives.
There is no one who have enough money.
There is no one who have enough money.
>> There is no one who has enough money.
We live in the capitalism. so a money is very important thing to live our life.
We live in the capitalism. so a money is very important thing to live our life.
>> We live in a capitalist society, so money is a very important thing to sustain our lives.
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