Which one do you prefer, reading or watching? Why?

2024-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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I want to prefer watching movie in Disney+. There are movies and shorts. There are Disney part, Pixar part...... many things in Disney+. But I like to prefer Pixar part. Beacause There is many fun movies and shorts.

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I want to prefer watching movie in Disney+.

>> I prefer watching movies in Disney+.

There are movies and shorts.

>> There are movies and short clips.

There are Disney part, Pixar part...... many things in Disney+.

>> There are many things in Disney+ such as Disney movies and Pixar films.

But I like to prefer Pixar part.

>> But I prefer Pixar movies.

Beacause There is many fun movies and shorts.

>> It\'s because there are many fun movies and short clips.

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