Which one do you prefer, someone who is beautiful or someone who is intelligent?
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Homework: Which one do you prefer, someone who is beautiful or someone who is intelligent?
I prefer a intelligent person. Human prefer mostly beautiful something.I think intelligent person will make up beautiful.
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Hello Tony! Thank you for always reading feedback. Just continue practicing!
Until the next one!
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila ^_^
>>I prefer an intelligent person.
Human prefer mostly beautiful something.
>>Human prefers mostly beautiful things.
OR>>Humans mostly prefer the most beautiful things.
I think intelligent person will make up beautiful.
>>I think an intelligent person is beautiful.
OR>>I think an intelligent person will make up beauty.
OR>>I think intelligence can make someone beautiful.
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