Which one do you prefer, working alone or working with other people? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I prefer working with other people than working alone.
Because I think working with other people can save my time more and I like doing something with other people.
And if I work with a stranger, I can make a frined and also I can grow my social ability.
So I prefer working with other people than working alone.
강사 첨삭
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Working with other people and working on your own have both advantages and disadvantages. It just depends on the person how he/she is going to handle it. :)
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Actually, I prefer working with other people than working alone.
>> CORRECT
>> Because I think it can save my time more and I like doing something with other people.
And if I work with a stranger, I can make a frined and also I can grow my social ability.
>> And if I work with a stranger, I can make a friend and also I can grow my social skills.
So I prefer working with other people than working alone.
>> CORRECT
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