Which one do you think is better, being a boss or being a leader? Explain your answer.

2021-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I don’t know what is different between a boss and being a leader, because they are the top of a group. But I think a leader is better than a boss. Because the word ‘leader’ can provide an image of kindness and familiar.

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A boss manages their employees, while a leader inspires them to innovate, think creatively, and strive for perfection. Every team has a boss, but what people need is a leader who will help them achieve greatness.

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I don’t know what is different between a boss and being a leader, because they are the top of a group.

>> I don’t know what is different between a boss and a leader because they are the top of a group.

But I think a leader is better than a boss.

>> CORRECT

Because the word ‘leader’ can provide an image of kindness and familiar

>> The word \"leader\" can provide an image of kindness and familiarization.

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