Which one do you think is better, being a boss or being a leader? Explain your answer.

2021-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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In my opinion, being a leader is better than being a boss. A boss is just a high person at a company, and being a boss doesn\'t help anything for other people. A leader is a high person in a sciety, and being a great leader helps people to live nicely. I think being a leader is much harder than being a boss. Because a leader is more higher than a boss and because of it, a leader has planty of responsibilities. But I have a confidence about being a leader, so I think being a leader is better than being a boss for me.

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boss manages their employees, while a leader inspires them to innovate, think creatively, and strive for perfection. Every team has a boss, but what people need is a leader who will help them achieve greatness.

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In my opinion, being a leader is better than being a boss.
>> CORRECT

A boss is just a high person at a company, and being a boss doesn\'t help anything for other people.
>> A boss is just a person with a high position in a company. And being a boss doesn\'t help anyone in their company. 

A leader is a high person in a sciety, and being a great leader helps people to live nicely.
>> A leader is a considered a respected person in a society and they usually help people live nicely. 

I think being a leader is much harder than being a boss.
>> CORRECT

Because a leader is more higher than a boss and because of it, a leader has planty of responsibilities.
>> Being a leader is better than being a boss because they usually have plenty of responsibilities but still does it well. 

But I have a confidence about being a leader, so I think being a leader is better than being a boss for me.
>> I think I have the confidence in being a leader. 

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