Which one do you think is better, buying things in the mall or the internet?
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Which one do you think is better, buying things in the mall or the internet?
 
I think that If I would like to buy cheaper one, I prefer to buy in the mail or internet.
When I want to buy a better quality product, I prefer to buy off line shopping.
Sometimes, I check the product what I want to buy in advance to the off line shop and then I search the lowest price in the internet.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
That\'s what I do too! Thanks for sharing :)
I think that If I would like to buy cheaper one, I prefer to buy in the mail or internet.
>> I think that If I would like to buy cheaper items so I would buy through online.
When I want to buy a better quality product, I prefer to buy off line shopping.
>> I think that If I would like to buy cheaper items so I would buy through online.
When I want to buy a better quality product, I prefer to buy off line shopping.
>> When I want to buy something with better quality, I would buy at the mall.
Sometimes, I check the product what I want to buy in advance to the off line shop and then I search the lowest price in the internet.
>> Sometime I check the product what I want to buy in advance at the mall and then I search the lowest price on the internet.
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