Which one do you think is better, electronic books or traditional books, and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, traditional books are better than electronic books.
First, reading an electronic book may hurt our eyes.
As you know, watching our phones a lot could hurt our eyes (and so as electronic books).
Second, We can feel a specific emotion by reading a traditional book.
A traditional book is made of paper, so we can feel specific emotions by reading it.
Because of these reasons, I think that traditional books are better than electronic books.
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I prefer traditional books too because most of the facts there are accurate.
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In my opinion, traditional books are better than electronic books.
>> CORRECT
First, reading an electronic book may hurt our eyes.
>> CORRECT
As you know, watching our phones a lot could hurt our eyes (and so as electronic books)
>> CORRECT
Second, We can feel a specific emotion by reading a traditional book.
>> Second, we can feel a specific emotion by reading a traditional book.
A traditional book is made of paper, so we can feel specific emotions by reading it.
>> CORRECT
Because of these reasons, I think that traditional books are better than electronic books.
>> CORRECT
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