Which one do you think is better, getting married early or getting married late? Why?

2023-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think getting married early is better than last. It\'s because getting married late is regretful. When we get married early, we have to take a picture during wedding so we can leave our young and beautiful moment. This moment is just once. And after, we can see the picture and remember it. But If we get married late, when we take a picture, some case has the picture having our old appearance so sometimes we regret it.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Daisy. ^_^
Thank you for sharing your opinion about this. I think getting married too young and getting married too old are both not good.
Maybe getting married in mid-20s until early 30s is better because we are mature enough; not too young or too old.
Anyhow, that\'s my view on this matter.
I hope you\'re dong great. ^^
See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry

I think getting married early is better than last.

>> I think getting married early is better than late.

It\'s because getting married late is regretful.

>> CORRECT!

When we get married early, we have to take a picture during wedding so we can leave our young and beautiful moment.

>> When we get married early, we have to take a picture during wedding so we can keep photos of our young and beautiful moments.

This moment is just once.

>> CORRECT!

And after, we can see the picture and remember it.

>> After that, we can go back to those pictures and remember it.

But If we get married late, when we take a picture, some case has the picture having our old appearance so sometimes we regret it.

>> But if we get married late and take a picture, the pictures will show our old appearance in some cases so we sometimes regret it.

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