Which one do you think is better, living alone or with someone?

2022-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I live alone, I will be lonely. So I want to live with someone who is neat and good at organizing things. It\'s because I have a clean personality.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic:)

Having company in our house really is very comforting. You can have another person that can help you in every step of the way. :)

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If I live alone, I will be lonely.

>> CORERCT

So I want to live with someone who is neat and good at organizing things.

>> So, I want to live with someone who is neat and good at organizing things.

It\'s because I have a clean personality.

>> It\'s because I am very organized myself.

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