Which one do you think is better, living alone or with someone? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, living with someone is better than living alone.
Because humans are socialized creatures so it is good to communicate each other.
And also I heard that laughing can keep us live long.
I can do more things if I live with someone.
Also there is no problem with living with someone.
So I think living with someone is better than living alone.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
Having company in our house really is very comforting. You can have another person that can help you in every step of the way. :)
In my opinion, living with someone is better than living alone.
>> CORRECT
Because humans are socialized creatures so it is good to communicate each other.
>> It\'s because humans are socializing creatures so it is necessary to communicate with each other.
And also I heard that laughing can keep us live long.
>> Also, I heard that laughing can make us live longer.
I can do more things if I live with someone.
>> CORRECT
Also there is no problem with living with someone.
>> Also, there is no problem with living with someone.
So I think living with someone is better than living alone.
>> So I think that living with someone is better than living alone.
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