Which one do you think is better, living in a country that has 2 seasons or 4 seasons? Explain your
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Living in a country that has 4 seasons is better for me because on the spring season, I can see flowers like blossom or forsythia and go flower viewing. On the autumn season, I can feel emotional feeling and wear brown clothes. On the Summer season, I can eat watermelons and go to swimming pool. On the winter season, I can make a snowman and eat hot dishes. These are the reasons why living in a country that has 4 seasons is better for me.
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Hi Kimberly :)
Yes, I envy your country. You can do various activities every season. I wish we can experience that too!.
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Living in a country that has 4 seasons is better for me because on the spring season, I can see flowers like blossom or forsythia and go flower viewing.
>> Living in a country that has 4 seasons is better for me. For example, on the spring season, I can see flowers like cherry blossoms or forsythia. I can also go flower viewing.
On the autumn season, I can feel emotional feeling and wear brown clothes.
>> During the autumn season, I feel emotional and I usually wear brown colored clothes.
On the Summer season, I can eat watermelons and go to swimming pool.
>> During the summer season, I can eat watermelons and go to swimming pools.
On the winter season, I can make a snowman and eat hot dishes.
>> Lastly, on winter, I can make a snowman and eat hot dishes.
These are the reasons why living in a country that has 4 seasons is better for me.
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