Which one do you think is better, living in a country that has 2 seasons or 4 seasons?
학생이 쓴 원문
Definitely, I want to live in a country that has 4 seasons. Having a lot of seasons means that we can make many memories. I really hate being cold and easily get a cold, I like snowy days. I can make a snowman, I can also do snowball fight, and there are many things I can do.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic:)
Yes, I envy your country. You can do various activities every season. I wish we can experience that too!.
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Definitely, I want to live in a country that has 4 seasons.
>> I definitely want to live in a country that has 4 seasons.
Having a lot of seasons means that we can make many memories.
>> CORRECT
I really hate being cold and easily get a cold, I like snowy days.
>> I really hate being cold and I easily get a cold but I still like snowy days.
I can make a snowman, I can also do snowball fight, and there are many things I can do.
>> I can make a snowman, have a snowball fight and many more.
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