Which one do you think is better, living in a country that has 2 seasons or 4 seasons? Explain your
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Which one do you think is better, living in a country that has 2 seasons or 4 seasons?
Our country has 4 seasons.
I think that it is better to have 4 seasons.
Because I can experience 4 seasons.
If I could experience 2 seasons, one season would be too long.
I love to experience a beautiful 4 seasons every year.
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Yes, I envy your country. You can do various activities every season. I wish we can experience that too!.
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Our country has 4 seasons.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
I think that it is better to have 4 seasons.
>> CORRECT
Because I can experience 4 seasons.
>> It is because I can experience 4 seasons.
If I could experience 2 seasons, one season would be too long.
>> If I live in a country that only has 2 seasons, each season would be too long.
I love to experience a beautiful 4 seasons every year.
>> I love experiencing 4 beautiful seasons every year.
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