Which one do you think is better, living with relatives or living alone?
학생이 쓴 원문
Sometimes, I want to be alone for thinking, clearing my head and when resting comfortably. But It\'s better living with relatives. I like to talk and listen with someone. And I think people don\'t get depressed when they talk with other people.
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Hi Elic!
It\'s a very tough choice.
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Sometimes, I want to be alone for thinking, clearing my head and when resting comfortably.
>> Sometimes, I want to be alone to think, clear my head and rest comfortably.
But It\'s better living with relatives.
>> But it\'s better living with relatives.
I like to talk and listen with someone.
>> CORRECT
And I think people don\'t get depressed when they talk with other people.
>> CORRECT
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