Which one do you think is better, living with relatives or living alone?
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Which one do you think is better, living with relatives or living alone? Explain your answer.
If I have important freedom and independence, I should live in alone.
If not, I should stay with the family.
I need to decide my priorities in life.
It depends on my mind entirely.
I still want to live with my parents.
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If I have important freedom and independence, I should live in alone.
>> If I want freedom and independence, I should live in alone.
If not, I should stay with the family.
>> CORRECT
I need to decide my priorities in life.
>> CORRECT
It depends on my mind entirely.
>> CORRECT
I still want to live with my parents.
>> CORRECT
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