Which one do you think is better, living with relatives or living alone? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, living alone is much better than living with relatives.
First, there are a lot of differences between me and my relatives.
There are sometimes conflicts of opinions between me and my family, and me and my relatives will do so.
And also I just want to live alone if I don\'t have my own family.
Because of these reasons, living alone is much better than living with relatives for me.
강사 첨삭
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Both has their pros and cons. It really depends on the person. Me, I prefer living alone because I like being independent.
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In my opinion, living alone is much better than living with relatives.
>> CORRECT
First, there are a lot of differences between me and my relatives.
>> CORRECT
There are sometimes conflicts of opinions between me and my family, and me and my relatives will do so.
>> Sometimes there are conflicts of opinions between me and my family.
And also I just want to live alone if I don\'t have my own family.
>> Also, I want to live along even if I don\'t have my own family yet.
Because of these reasons, living alone is much better than living with relatives for me.
>> CORRECT
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