Which one do you think is better, owning your home or renting a home?
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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. Which one do you think is better, owning your home or renting a home?
To start with my conclusion, I prefer to rent my home. It’s because I can get some choices from renting home to other home and also if I own my home, I’ll have to pay more taxes. On the contrary, renting home is cheaper than owning it and we can move to other countryside after the engagement is over.
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Hi, Harry! :)
Thank you very much for diligently doing your homework.
I agree that renting a house has a lot of advantages. However, it is also nice to have your own home especially after retirement because people don\'t earn much after retirement and could greatly struggle in paying their rents. So I guess it depends on what stage you are in your life to truly determine if it\'s better to rent or own a house.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having an awesome afternoon. ^^
See you in class tomorrow. :)
~Teacher Charry
I agree that renting a house has a lot of advantages. However, it is also nice to have your own home especially after retirement because people don\'t earn much after retirement and could greatly struggle in paying their rents. So I guess it depends on what stage you are in your life to truly determine if it\'s better to rent or own a house.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having an awesome afternoon. ^^
See you in class tomorrow. :)
~Teacher Charry
>> CORRECT!
It’s because I can get some choices from renting home to other home and also if I own my home, I’ll have to pay more taxes.
>> It\'s because I can have a lot of choices from renting a home as compared to owning a home. In addition, if I own my home, I’ll have to pay more taxes.
On the contrary, renting home is cheaper than owning it and we can move to other countryside after the engagement is over.
>> On the contrary, renting a home is cheaper than owning it and we can easily move to another location/place/city after the engagement is over.
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