Which one do you think is better, working in Korea or working in a different country?
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I think both things are good, but working in a different country is better. Because, If I work in foreign company, I can experience new things that I can\'t experience in Korea. Moreover, I can be surrounded various foreign languages. Therefore, I can learn languages more easily and quickly.
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There are many reasons why working abroad will benefit both yourself personally, and your career. Two of the most obvious (yet still important) are: Better career opportunities and prospects: Depending on your skill set, there may be a greater range of career opportunities open to you outside your home market.
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Because, If I work in foreign company, I can experience new things that I can\'t experience in Korea.
>> If we work in a foreign company, I can experience new things that I can\'t experience in Korea.
Moreover, I can be surrounded various foreign languages.
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Therefore, I can learn languages more easily and quickly.
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