Which one is better, studying abroad or studying in South Korea? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
Studying in South Korea is better for me because I can speak Korean and have lived for about 15 years. I can understand the contents which my teachers explain. So, I prefer Studying in South Korea. However, I want to try studying abroad because I can learn about other countries\' cultures. Of course I\'m not good at speaking and understanding English but, I think that if I study abroad, I will gain more than I lose. So, I want to try studying abroad.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kimberly!
There are advantages and disadvantages to studying abroad. It usually depends on your main goal. :)
Studying in South Korea is better for me because I can speak Korean and have lived for about 15 years.
>> Studying in South Korea is better for me because I can speak Korean and I have lived here for about 15 years already.
I can understand the contents which my teachers explain.
>> CORRECT
So, I prefer Studying in South Korea.
>> CORRECT
However, I want to try studying abroad because I can learn about other countries\' cultures.
>> However, I want to try studying abroad too because I can learn about other countries\' cultures.
Of course I\'m not good at speaking and understanding English but, I think that if I study abroad, I will gain more than I lose.
>> I may not be good at speaking and understanding English but I think that if I study abroad, I will gain more than loosing,
So, I want to try studying abroad.
>> CORRECT
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