which one is better, traveling alone or traveling with a companion?
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It depends on the purpose of travel. If I want to know the real aspects of the person whom I intend to figure out, I will travel with a companion. If not, it's better idea to travel alone. Ecxcpt for feeling lonely, traveling alone has some advantages.
First, I can reflect myself in my free time. Second, I can have chances to meet and communicate with various people. Through the intereaction, I can learn their cultures and thoughts. Third, during the journdy, I can be a better strategy plannerto have enjoyable ,memorable and precious time. Fouth, sometimes I cna escape from people whenever I want to stay alone or whenever I don't feel like being interrupted. I can manage my golden time in my own way. I perfer to travel alone than to travel with a companion.
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If I want to know the real aspects of the person whom I intend to figure out, I will travel with a companion.
>>If I already know the real personality of the person I intend to travel with, then I will travel with a companion.
If not, it\'s better idea to travel alone. Ecxcpt for feeling lonely,
>> But If not, it will be a better idea to travel alone except if you’re feeling lonely.
traveling alone has some advantages.
>> Traveling alone has some advantages.
First, I can reflect myself in my free time.
>> First, I can reflect on myself during my free time.
Second, I can have chances to meet and communicate with various people.
>> Second, I have the chances to meet and communicate with various people.
Through the intereaction, I can learn their cultures and thoughts.
>> Through interactions, I can learn their cultures and thoughts.
Third, during the journdy, I can be a better strategy plannerto have enjoyable ,memorable and precious time.
>> Third, during the journey, I can have a better strategic plan to have an enjoyable, memorable and precious time.
Fouth, sometimes I cna escape from people whenever I want to stay alone or whenever I don\'t feel like being interrupted.
>> Lastly, sometimes I can escape from people if I don’t want to be interrupted.
I can manage my golden time in my own way.
>> I can manage my golden time on my own way.
I perfer to travel alone than to travel with a companion.
>>I prefer to travel alone than to travel with a companion.
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