which one is important in your life.
학생이 쓴 원문
I need to Laptop all the time wherever I stayed. Because Smartphone is too small and inconvenient when I search some information and watching video and books. In this reasons, Laptop is one of most important things in my life. Of course, tablet PC is also very useful and convenient to me but, they can\'t win over laptop\'s abilities. Plus, coffee is my favourite drink what can I take easily. I take coffee every morning before my class. If I take a class without coffee, I couldn\'t concentrate well. Actually, it isn\'t positive effect to me. I have to reduce the coffee a little.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay! Nice thoughts! ^^ Thank you for sharing.
I think it\'s very common for people to say either they can not live without their cellphones/laptops and the internet. It has become sort of a part of our day to day lives. ^^ But coffee? Yeah! Why not! ^ ^ Most people couldn\'t live without coffee! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I need to Laptop all the time wherever I stayed.
>>I need my laptop wherever I go.
Because Smartphone is too small and inconvenient when I search some information and watching video and books.
>>Smartphones are quite small and inconvenient especially when I\'m searching for some information, watching videos and/or reading eBooks.
In this reasons, Laptop is one of most important things in my life.
>>These are the reasons why my laptop is the most important thing in my life.
Of course, tablet PC is also very useful and convenient to me but, they can\'t win over laptop\'s abilities.
>>CORRECT
Plus, coffee is my favourite drink what can I take easily.
>>Coffee is also one of my favorite and that I can take easily.
I take coffee every morning before my class.
>>CORRECT
If I take a class without coffee, I couldn\'t concentrate well.
>>CORRECT
Actually, it isn\'t positive effect to me.
>>Actually, it doesn\'t have a positive effect on my body.
I have to reduce the coffee a little.
>>I think I have to reduce my coffee intake/consumption a little.
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