Which one more than like
학생이 쓴 원문
I like web surfing more than reading book.
Because every people using phone, so more than close connection with mobile.
And internet have lot of knowledge.
When I wonder something about, I can use internet surfing easley.
And that\'s why I like web surfing more than reading book.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Me too! I prefer using the internet as well because it is more convenient.
I like web surfing more than reading book.
>> I like web surfing more than reading books.
Because every people using phone, so more than close connection with mobile.
>> It\'s because most people use their phones nowadays so it we have a close relation with it.
And internet have lot of knowledge.
>> The internet also has a lot of information in it.
When I wonder something about, I can use internet surfing easley.
>> When I wonder about something, I can use the internet easily.
And that\'s why I like web surfing more than reading book.
>> This is why I like surfing the web more than reading a book.
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