Which one would you choose to take care? An owl or a parrot? Why?

2018-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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If there are only two things I can choose, I would take care of a parrot. As I know, an owl can live in dark place. I do not want to make any places I am staying dark. The other hand, there is no need to put parrot in the place as an owl prefer. I think a parrot is much more beautiful than an owl. I haven't seen people who keep owls at home, but I have ever seen people who raise a parrot. A parrot is colorful, cute, easy to manage and people can teach the way of speaking because parrot can imitate voice of human.

강사 첨삭

This is interesting, Sir [이름]!

I also prefer to pet a parrot because owls for me are creepy but beautiful creatures especially when they are making some noise at night. Thank you for sharing this piece with me. Have a great day! ^^

~Teacher Eunice


If there are only two things I can choose, I would take care of a parrot.

>>> If there are only two things I can choose from, I would rather take care a parrot.

As I know, an owl can live in dark place. 

>>> As I know, an owl can live in dark places.

I do not want to make any places I am staying dark. 

>>> I do not want to make my place dark.  

The other hand, there is no need to put parrot in the place as an owl prefer.

>>>  On the other hand, there is no need to put the parrot in the place where the owl prefers.

I think a parrot is much more beautiful than an owl.

>>> I think a parrot is more beautiful than an owl. 

I haven\'t seen people who keep owls at home, but I have ever seen people who raise a parrot. 

>>> I haven\'t seen people who keep owls at home, but I have seen people who raise a parrot.  

A parrot is colorful, cute, easy to manage and people can teach the way of speaking because parrot can imitate voice of human.

>>> A parrot is colorful, cute, easy to manage and people can teach them to speak because parrot can imitate the voice of a human. 

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