which one would you like to achieve?
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I want to achieve number 4 out of them
My goal is to reduce my golf handicap from 90 to 80.
Additionally, my goal for this year is to reduce something with less consumption, lose weight, drinking less and reduces stress.
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Hi Sir [이름]!^^
Additionally, my goal for this year is to reduce something with less consumption, lose weight, drinking less and reduces stress.
All of them are hard to achieve. haha
I need to follow number 3.
I have to organize my things and life too.
Andrea
I want to achieve number 4 out of them
>> Among all of them, I want to achieve number 4.
My goal is to reduce my golf handicap from 90 to 80.
My goal is to reduce my golf handicap from 90 to 80.
>> Correct
Additionally, my goal for this year is to reduce something with less consumption, lose weight, drinking less and reduces stress.
>> Correct
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