Which organization would you like to be active in?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I nave the chance, I\'d like to join a member of orchestra organization.
Even though my flute skills are not high now, it is possible to perform with them to some extent.
It is a good to me, to practice regularly with several musical instruments.
Of course when I become the member of orchestra, I will also have some stress.
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Teacher ELLY
Which organization would you like to be active in?If I nave the chance, I\'d like to join a member of orchestra organization.
>>If I have the chance, I\'d like to join as a member of an orchestra.
Even though my flute skills are not high now, it is possible to perform with them to some extent.
Even though my flute skills are not high now, it is possible to perform with them to some extent.
>>Even though my skill in playing the flute is not that as excellent as I would like now, it is still possible for me to perform with it up to some extent.
It is a good to me, to practice regularly with several musical instruments.
It is a good to me, to practice regularly with several musical instruments.
>>It is good to me, to practice regularly with several musical instruments.
Of course when I become the member of orchestra, I will also have some stress.
Of course when I become the member of orchestra, I will also have some stress.
>>Of course, when I become a member of an orchestra, I might also experience some sort of stress.
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