Which other Chuseok traditions do you think are slowly disappearing?
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Ritual ceremony for ancient is decreasing nowadays, young generation doesn’t care about traditional ceremony. All family gathering together is getting disappeared. Probably, next generation won’t care about Chuseok.
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>>Ritual ceremonies for our ancestors are disappearing nowadays. the young generation doesn\'t care about traditional ceremonies anymore.
2. All family gathering together is getting disappeared. Probably, next generation won’t care about Chuseok.
>>All forms of family gatherings are disappearing as well. Probably, the next generation won’t care about Chuseok anymore.
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