Which part of the school day is your favorite?
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My favorite part of the school is the music class. Firstly, we play a recorder in the class. Actually I am super good at playing a recorder so I have so much fun in this time. Secondly, the music teacher often let us watch a movie when we get better at playing recorder. Most movies she shows us are very interesting. Lastly, in fact, I love music and I feel so happy like a magic when I’m listening to music I like.
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>> My favorite part of the school is the music class. Firstly, we play a
recorder in the class. Actually I am super good at playing a recorder
so I have so much fun at that time. Secondly, the music teacher often
let us watch a movie when we get better at playing recorder. Most movies
she shows us are very interesting. Lastly, in fact, I love music and I
feel so happy when I’m listening to the music I like.
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