Which part of your childhood you wish you could change?

2018-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Q:Which part of your childhood you wish you could change? It is quite interesting question. I have a one thing. when I was elementary school, I really wanted to be a soccer player. but, I wasn't good soccer player, also my physical and strength weren't perfect to soccer player. if I was good physical and strength, maybe I got a soccer player. thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you once again for this. That\'s too bad then. Maybe being a soccer player was not meant for you. How about now? Do you have a dream you want to pursue?

- T. Beth

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It is quite interesting question.
>>>  It is quite an interesting question. 

I have a one thing.
>>> I have one thing.

>>> OR: There is one thing.  
when I was elementary school, I really wanted to be a soccer player.
>>> When I was in elementary school, I really wanted to be a soccer player.  
but, I wasn\'t good soccer player, also my physical and strength weren\'t perfect to soccer player.
>>> But, I wasn\'t a good soccer player. Also, my physicality and strength weren\'t perfect to be a soccer player.

>>> OR: However, I wasn\'t a good soccer player. In addition, my physicality and strength weren\'t perfect to be a soccer player. 
if I was good physical and strength, maybe I got a soccer player.
>>> If I had good physicality and strength, maybe I could have been a soccer player.  
thank you.

>>> Thank you.

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