Which period of your life do you like the most? Why?

2016-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Looking back on my life, the golden time was when I was at College for 4 years.Although I had struggled a lot from fundamental issues like what to do after graduation, how to live, what to pursue, how to form myself, etc., it was a great time that I would never have it again or never could go back.I have read many books, spent nights talking about life, justice, youth, politics, etc. with class mates over drinks. We often got together at a snack bar after class and drank together. Drinking was almost a daily routine at my college days. As one of the typical Korean students who study day and night and 24 hours a day to enter into College and then do just nothing that is meaningful and productive after entering College, I completely enjoyed the freedom of my college life to the extent that I can say I lived a dissipated life. I should have made more efforts and invested my time for my future. Although I was worried a lot about the uncertainty of my future, it was the pinnacle of my life.

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Fantastic afternoon to you Sir [이름]. Thank you for always sharing the your insights and experiences. I am learning a lot from you. To be honest, I am always excited to talk and read your compositions.I hope that you are having an easy day. See you tomorrow.Teacher Nina   Looking back on my life, the golden time was when I was at College for 4 years. >> correct Although I had struggled a lot from fundamental issues like what to do after graduation, how to live, what to pursue, how to form myself, etc., >> correct it was a great time that I would never have it again or never could go back. >> correct I have read many books, spent nights talking about life, justice, youth, politics, etc. with class mates over drinks. >> correct We often got together at a snack bar after class and drank together. >> correct Drinking was almost a daily routine at my college days. >> correct As one of the typical Korean students who study day and night and 24 hours a day to enter into College and then do just nothing that is meaningful and productive after entering College, I completely enjoyed the freedom of my college life to the extent that I can say I lived a dissipated life. >> correct >> OR: As one of the typical Korean students who study day and night and 24 hours a day to enter into College and then do just nothing that is meaningful and productive after entering College. I completely enjoyed the freedom of my college life to the extent that I can say I lived a dissipated life. I should have made more efforts and invested my time for my future. >> correct  Although I was worried a lot about the uncertainty of my future, it was the pinnacle of my life. >> correct

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