Which pet do you think is the best for children? Why?
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I think the best pet for children is dog because dog is friendly and cute.
I also think the best pet for children is fish because easy to raise, but fish is not member of family.
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Which pet do you think is the best for children? Why?
I think the best pet for children is dog because dog is friendly and cute.
>> I think the best pet for children is a dog because it\'s friendly and cute.
I also think the best pet for children is fish because easy to raise, but fish is not member of family.
>> Another is fish because it\'s easy to raise, but fish is not a member of the family.
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