Which picture book is your favorite and why?

2022-05-05 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

It is very hard to pick just one picture book as a favorite. However I choose this as the most like one right now. The title is \'Time of Travel\'. The story is about that it is important how I feel and what I feel at the moment in the place than other people\'s recomendations. So the main character find the precious points in each places. I deeply agree with the author\'s mind. It is very important to feel one\'s own impression through travel. I couldn\'t trip to anywhere since the Covid 19 comes in our life, but from now on, I hope to go anywhere for finding the thoughing place and moment again.

강사 첨삭

Hi Arissa,

Thank you for sharing your favorite picture book. 
I appreciate you for sending your answer to the homework question.
I hope that we will be able to travel soon in places where we can have enjoy, learn and grow as a person.
I haven\'t been able to travel as well due to the pandemic. But I think, it\'s getting better now so we will have our chance soon. ^^

~ Teacher Gina


It is very hard to pick just one picture book as a favorite. However I choose this as the most like one right now. The title is \'Time of Travel\'. The story is about that it is important how I feel and what I feel at the moment in the place than other people\'s recomendations. So the main character find the precious points in each places. I deeply agree with the author\'s mind. It is very important to feel one\'s own impression through travel. I couldn\'t trip to anywhere since the Covid 19 comes in our life, but from now on, I hope to go anywhere for finding the thoughing place and moment again.

>>  It is very hard to pick just one picture book as a favorite. However, I choose this as the one I like the most right now. The title is \'Time of Travel\'. The story is about the importance of how I feel and what I feel at the moment at the place than other people\'s recommendations. So the main character finds the precious points in each place. I deeply agree with the author\'s thinking. It is very important to feel one\'s own impression through travel. I couldn\'t go on a trip anywhere since Covid 19 came into our life. But from now on, I hope to go anywhere to find a touching place and moment again.

>> Or:  It is tough to pick just one picture book as a favorite. However, I choose this as the one I like the most. The title is \'Time of Travel\'. The story is about the importance of how I feel and what I feel at the moment at the place than other people\'s recommendations. So the main character finds the precious points in each area. I sincerely agree with the author\'s thinking. It is imperative to feel one\'s impression through travel. I couldn\'t go on a trip anywhere since Covid 19 came into our life. But from now on, I hope to go anywhere to find a touching place and moment again.

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