Which place in Korea is the best place for a spring vacation? Why?
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I think the best place for a spring vacation in Korea is Han river, because it is very cool and beautiful.
When boat is passing, it\'s very cool when take a picture.
Eating Ramen at Han river is very delicious, and it\'s truth.
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Which place in Korea is the best place for a spring vacation? Why?
I think the best place for a spring vacation in Korea is Han river, because it is very cool and beautiful.
>> I think the best place for a spring vacation in Korea is the Han River because it is very cool and beautiful.
When boat is passing, it\'s very cool when take a picture.
>> When a boat is passing, we can take cool pictures picture.
Eating Ramen at Han river is very delicious, and it\'s truth.
>> We can eat delicious ramen at Han River and it\'s the truth.
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