Which place in Korea is the best place for a spring vacation? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
When the spring is come, a flower is famous in Korea, especially in April.
So, I recommend you should go to the famous flower spot in the spring season.
In Seoul, there are some flower spot. but, Yeouio-do is most famous spot. you can see the many flowers with big river.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! That sounds like an awesome place for spring vacation. Thank you for recommending it and sharing why this is an awesome place.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
When the spring is come, a flower is famous in Korea, especially in April.
>> When spring comes, a particular flower becomes famous in Korea, especially in April.
So, I recommend you should go to the famous flower spot in the spring season.
>> So, I recommend visiting popular flower spots during the spring season.
In Seoul, there are some flower spot. but, Yeouio-do is most famous spot. you can see the many flowers with big river.
>> In Seoul, there are several flower spots, but Yeouido is the most famous one. You can see many flowers along with a big river.
>> When spring comes, a particular flower becomes famous in Korea, especially in April.
So, I recommend you should go to the famous flower spot in the spring season.
>> So, I recommend visiting popular flower spots during the spring season.
In Seoul, there are some flower spot. but, Yeouio-do is most famous spot. you can see the many flowers with big river.
>> In Seoul, there are several flower spots, but Yeouido is the most famous one. You can see many flowers along with a big river.
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