Which place in Korea will you recommend for people to visit?
학생이 쓴 원문
If people will be going to vist in Korea, I want to recommend in Busan
There is The [이름]undae Beach, The Gwangalli Beach etc .
It\'s else a lot of famous places
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your answer.
I\'ve heard about Busan before and a lot of people were saying that it is really a nice place to visit in your country. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> If people will be going to Korea, I want to recommend Busan.
>> Or: If people will visit Korea, I want to recommend Busan.
There is The [이름]undae Beach, The Gwangalli Beach etc .
There is The [이름]undae Beach, The Gwangalli Beach etc .
>> There is the [이름]undae Beach, the Gwangalli Beach etc .
It\'s else a lot of famous places
It\'s else a lot of famous places
>> There are also a lot of other famous places.
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