Which place in the world has the best night sky? Why?
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I think the world has the best night sky is North Pole because the north pole has aurora so it is the best night sky
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Which place in the world has the best night sky? Why?
I think the world has the best night sky is North Pole because the north pole has aurora so it is the best night sky
>> I think the North Pole has the best night sky because you can see the aurora borealis.
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