Which place or country would you like to visit at least once in your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to go to Iceland.
Because Iceland has a lot of Milky Way. I want to go see that. That\'s a beautiful.
강사 첨삭
Hi, James! I hope you will be able to go to Iceland one day. The space also fascinates me. I would love to stare at the Milky Way on a clear starry night. Let\'s talk again soon. See you!
--Teacher Anji
I want to go to Iceland. Because Iceland has a lot of Milky Way.
>> I want to go to Iceland because you can see the Milky Way from there.
I want to go see that.
>> CORRECT
That\'s a beautiful.
>> CORRECT
>> I want to go to Iceland because you can see the Milky Way from there.
I want to go see that.
>> CORRECT
That\'s a beautiful.
>> CORRECT
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