Which places in the world do you think are too dangerous to visit? Why are they dangerous?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have visited in Medelin, Colombia.
This city was well known as huge mafias and drugs.
Especially it was the city that Escobar, king of drugs, lived in.
As I heard of it, everyone who I met there warned me to care of myself and do not walk alone.
So I just walked on the main street and used a group tour with a crew.
As a result, the people I met in Medelin were so kind and friendly with me.
If I went to the dangerous place alone, I don\'t know what would be happened to me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ian!
Thank you once again for doing your homework. Like what you told me during the lesson; if ever you are given another chance to visit that place, you said that you want to try immersing yourself there. I think that would be interesting and at the same time, scary.
- T. Caitlyn
I have visited in Medelin, Colombia.
>> I have been to Medellin, Columbia.
This city was well known as huge mafias and drugs.
This city was well known as huge mafias and drugs.
>> This city was well known for huge mafias and drugs.
Especially it was the city that Escobar, king of drugs, lived in.
Especially it was the city that Escobar, king of drugs, lived in.
>> Especially because it was the city that Escobar, the king of drugs, lived in.
As I heard of it, everyone who I met there warned me to care of myself and do not walk alone.
As I heard of it, everyone who I met there warned me to care of myself and do not walk alone.
>> When I heard it, everyone that I met there warned me to take care of myself and not walk alone.
So I just walked on the main street and used a group tour with a crew.
So I just walked on the main street and used a group tour with a crew.
>> So I just walked on the main street and joined a group tour with a tour guide.
As a result, the people I met in Medelin were so kind and friendly with me.
>> Because of that, I met a lot of people in Medellin and they were so kind and friendly.
If I went to the dangerous place alone, I don\'t know what would be happened to me.
If I went to the dangerous place alone, I don\'t know what would be happened to me.
>> If I went to the dangerous place alone, I don\'t know what could\'ve happened to me.
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