Which products would you like to sell if you had your own store?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m not good at persuading people to buy something. So I want to sell products that need less marketing skills. And I think stationary store will be a good choice. When people visit a stationary store, they already firmly decided what to buy. It means they will buy or will not buy something regardless of what I say. Also, most products sold in a stationary store are cheap so most people don\'t deeply ponder whether to buy it or not. So I don\'t have to get into their decision process. In conclusion, I want to own a stationary store if I have my own store because I don\'t have to persuade people to buy something.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
Great job! Thanks for writing your homework! ^^
Interesting answers. I\'d like to visit your store in the future. Haha! ^^
Anyway, Enjoy the holiday! See you tomorrow~
Interesting answers. I\'d like to visit your store in the future. Haha! ^^
Anyway, Enjoy the holiday! See you tomorrow~
-T.Jhozel
I\'m not good at persuading people to buy something.
>> Correct!
OR: I\'m not very good at convincing people to buy things.
So I want to sell products that need less marketing skills.
>> Correct!
OR: So I want to sell products that require little expertise in marketing.
And I think stationary store will be a good choice.
>> Correct!
OR: And I believe a stationery store will be a good choice.
When people visit a stationary store, they already firmly decided what to buy.
>> Correct!
OR: People go to a stationary store knowing exactly what they want to buy.
It means they will buy or will not buy something regardless of what I say.
>> Correct!
OR: It means that they will buy or not buy something regardless of what I say.
Also, most products sold in a stationary store are cheap so most people don\'t deeply ponder whether to buy it or not.
>> Correct!
OR: Furthermore, because most products sold in a stationary store are inexpensive, most people do not give it much thought before purchasing.
So I don\'t have to get into their decision process.
>> Correct!
OR: So I don\'t have to get involved in their decision-making process.
In conclusion, I want to own a stationary store if I have my own store because I don\'t have to persuade people to buy something.
OR: In conclusion, if I have my own store, I don\'t want to have to persuade people to buy anything.
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