Which punishment is more severe, the death penalty or life imprisonment?
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Perfect composition, Sir [이름]!
Happy Tuesday. ^^ I am so happy that you sent a composition.
Yes, you are right. Death penalty is more severe.
I think I can lessen crimes. ^.^
But there are a lot of people who are against it.
Why do you think so?
We can talk more about this in class.
Have a good day.
Teacher Nina
The death penalty is more severe than life imprisonment because the capital punishment is the ultimate sentence the modern judicial system can impose.
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In the ancient society, there was a punishment that could hand down to the criminal’s family or relatives.
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However, in the modern society, taking the life of the criminal is the heaviest and the most severe punishment.
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The imprisonment for life is also severe, however, at least he/she does not need to worry about being executed.
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He/she can still dream of and actually try to achieve something in the prison, although there are some constraints.
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He/she can learn and even finish bachelor’s or even higher degrees.
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If he/she is fortunate, he/she could be granted a special amnesty.
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However, the death penalty doesn’t give any second chance.
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Once it is executed, the life cannot be recovered.
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This is why many human rights advocates support abolishing the capital punishment.
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A human is capable of adapting himself/herself to a new environment.
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