Which region of your country has the best weather? What is it like there?
학생이 쓴 원문
I search Internet as our country\'s the best weather region , it is Gangneung. Donghae and Sam check in Gangwon-do.
It\'s cool in summer and cold a little than anotther region in winter, the fine dust isn\'t bad.
I want to go to there again.
강사 첨삭
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Which region of your country has the best weather? What is it like there?
I search Internet as our country\'s the best weather region , it is Gangneung. Donghae and Sam check in Gangwon-do.
>> I searched on the Internet and it says Gangneung, Donghae, and Samcheok in the Gangwon-do region have the best weather in Korea.
It\'s cool in summer and cold a little than anotther region in winter, the fine dust isn\'t bad.
>> It\'s cool in summer and a little colder than other regions in winter, and the fine dust isn\'t bad.
I want to go to there again.
>> I want to go there again.
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